Kannanodu - Dukham II

Dukham was one among the most appreciated poem written by me for several reason. Tune seems good and there is a typical prasam(rhyming) used in that poem called adyakshara prasam(rhyming on the first letter). Thanx for all your comments and that forced me to come up with a second version of Dukham.. This time instead of depending on a 'gal friend who may come in future' ... I found a new friend who will never get bored of my sentiments. He is none other than Lord Krishna...I havent set any tune for this because its on the same tune of previous "Dukham" poem and is not updated to my podcast.

Poem Starts from Here:

Ariyilla kannuneer en mizhikonil,
Akalathe nilkunnathenthu kondo?
Azhakerum vennilavenne nokki,
Melle karayuvathenthu kondo?

Kala kalam padunna puzhayude theerathu,
Veruthe irikkuvan mohamundu.
Karayuvanallathe karmukhil paithalin,
Chirithookum ananam kanuvanum.

Hridayathinullile vedhana ninnodu,
Parayatte en priya koottukara.
Ariyilla lokhar than kadana katha kettu nee,
Vyasanichu nilkayo karmukhilvarna.

Karunamayanam nin kadaksham ennil,
Choriyumarakenam nandalala.
Oru thulli kannuneerallathe en kayyil,
Pakaram tharan mattonnu milla.